This poem is goodbut it could be great if you structured it right:youve got the stanzas going:Dbut im just here to help:Ptry'If i could fly like a birdi would fly so very high.I would soar through the skyleaving all my worries behind.If i could fly like a birdmy face would touch the the cloudswhile my feathers hit the groundas the wind cools me down.If i could fly like a birdtime would slow me downgiving me time to enjoy the peacethat surronds all around.If i could fly like a birdswift as a lighti know for a facti would love this graceful flight.' It helps people read it better and flowits a very light happy poemand i enjoyed reading it:.
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